Extended Response [0990/12, Nov 2021]
Text C: Moving on upwards This text is taken from a longer narrative. At this point in the story, the narrator is taking part in a bicycle ride uphill for his fiftieth birthday celebration. Their car rounds the bend ahead, Sonny’s phone screen winking at me from the window. Time for another gulp of water. My bottle crackles as I squeeze it and a thick stream shoots into my mouth. Too much. The excess liquid splatters fatly on the greedy asphalt, and I realise it may be the one crucial drop I will be crying out for on my final kilometres to the summit. 5 This novel adventure was a gift to myself. I’d reached the big 5-0. More a milestone than a birthday. Inviting the family around for cake and crisps wasn’t going to be enough. No, what I needed was a challenge to prove that what my teenage son, Sonny, called my ‘sinking into old age’ did not have to match a decline in physical fitness. My friend Rob, agreed to c...