Writer's Effects [0990/12, March 2022]

 

Text C:

The wild tigers of Ranthambore The narrator, Val, is a photographer, author and documentary filmmaker. He has spent over 45 years living, working and campaigning at the tiger reserve in Ranthambore National Park, near the town of Sawai Madhopur (SM). In this extract from his book, Val remembers first travelling to the area by train from his city home as a young man in 1976.

Exiting the deserted station, I woke up the driver of a solitary horse-drawn carriage.

In those days Sawai Madhopur (SM) boasted few motorised vehicles. The town wasn’t prosperous. Numerous taxi-jeeps and buses taking chattering tourists into the park were still figments of shiny future ambition. Garish hotel chains were yet to sprout, mushrooming along newly surfaced roads to the park. This was a sleepy town, sprawled untidily around the railway track, the only reason for its existence.

Since then, local painters have decorated the station walls. Now murals of our tigers and other wildlife engage curious passers-by, increasing awareness like a kind of open-air art museum.

Back in 1976, we trotted off to the only guesthouse nearby. A reluctant proprietor prised open a musty room. I spent a sleepless night.

Next morning, I introduced myself to Fateh, the wildlife warden for the park. He looked over his luxuriant moustache disbelievingly at me and my camera. No one came here, he told me, to ‘visit’.

Jolting along dirt tracks, we drove out towards the reserve. Slowly the wilderness took over. I scanned the thickening forest for wildlife, unaware my tracking skills would take years to develop.

My first days felt like shedding one layer of skin and growing into another. As you track a tiger, the language of the jungle envelopes you in its folds. You’re alert to the tension in every rustling leaf, in every impression on the ground. Animal tracks whisper stories of the night. You’re a jungle detective seeking clues of tigers having padded past. In the early years, just a paw-print was cause for celebration. There were still villages everywhere; human disturbance was high.

Until the 1980s, there were few pictures of tigers in the wild. Even then tourism to the area was only just starting, driven by Fateh’s determination to make Ranthambore the most important wildlife destination in the world. My pictures of tigers like Noon drew multitudes to the forests of Ranthambore, transforming the local economy. People in the area owed their improving prospects to Noon.

Noon had been a tigress who filled my senses. Fateh teased me – saying I’d fallen in love with a tigress. Whenever I arrived in her presence there was a quick look of recognition. Most of the time it was just her and me with my camera.

Visiting research-scientists warned me to keep detached, not humanise tigers, but Noon grew into a pleasant obsession, deepening my understanding of the secret life of tigers. I don’t think I experienced such closeness with a tiger again. Back then I could drive out alone and watch tigers in solitude. There were fewer rules, fewer visitors asking to join me. Even today, traversing the lakes which were at the heart of her territory, I can summon up images of Noon slicing through their waters or erupting from a grassy bank in incredible pursuits of deer or wild boar – lmages that remain etched on my mind.

Sometimes when hunting, Noon would look skywards and follow the direction vultures took. Visitors are still fascinated today by film of her tracking low-flying vultures, trotting from lake to lake until she found the carcass of a deer. Back then, I explain, Ranthambore was full of white-backed vultures, before chemicals used for injecting livestock and ingested by these scavenging birds wiped them out. Nature lost a cleaning service. Noon lost her food-finders.

I last saw Noon in 1990 beside Ranthambore lake. She looked older. Tigers get paler with age. The sun was setting, its last rays framing her in golden light. By this time, she’d successfully raised two litters and delighted the world with our footage of her kills, racing into the shallows of the lakes, causing chaos amongst grazing deer and more often than not bringing one down. The tourist boom followed – thanks to Noon – with no shortage of high-profile visitors keen to promote the cause of wild tigers.


Question


(d)    Re-read paragraphs 2 and 10.

        Paragraph 2 begins ‘In those days and is about the town of SM.

        Paragraph 10 begins ‘Visiting research-scientists and is about Noon and the writer’s feelings about this tiger.

Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include the use of imagery.

 Write about 200 to 300 words.

 Up to 15 marks are available for the content of your answer.


Answers


Paragraph 2 begins ‘In those days …’ and is about the town of SM

 

Overview: stark contrast between the past and more recent times; how SM has changed to become larger, busier and more commercial.

 

          boasted few motorised vehicles: did not have many cars, buses etc.; old fashioned reference to ‘motorised vehicles’ as if still relatively unusual and something to show off about; this town was neither fashionable nor modern


          wasn’t prosperous: not wealthy, not successful in material or monetary terms, implied contrast with the economic success the town will enjoy in later years


          numerous taxi-jeeps and buses: so many commercial vehicles it was not possible to count, they are now everywhere, bustling busy nature of the booming town contrasted with previous quiet backwater

 

          chattering tourists: talking excitedly, evokes a dynamic and noisy picture of large groups of visitors


          still figments of shiny future ambition: imagined developments are not yet real, seemingly unlikely dreams and hopes, apparently unrealistic plans based on dull reality of that time, romanticised view of what they might achieve, yet the sense that it came true as town becomes modernised / flashy

 

          garish hotel chains: lurid, obtrusive brightly coloured hotels owned by big organisations, suggests profit over sensitivity to area


          yet to sprout: not yet appeared but will appear suddenly, as if organically like leaves or hair; seeds of success


          mushrooming: hotel buildings increasing rapidly, town is growing upwards and outwards, uncontrolled and exponential growth


          sleepy town, sprawled untidily: quiet place with little sense of planning or design, relaxed and unconcerned about image; possible suggestion of a stereotypical teenager yet to mature



Paragraph 10 begins ‘Visiting research-scientists …’ and is about Noon and

the writer’s feelings about this tiger.

 



Overview: described as if in love; reliving fond memories, tinged with a sense of loss and longing.

 

          grew into a pleasant obsession: developed like a hobby or habit, becomes besotted, not destructive but calming and enjoyable fascination

 

          deepening my understanding of the secret life of tigers: little known or shared about tigers’ habits and behaviours, finds out more and more about how tigers live, developing knowledge reveals previously undiscovered details of the mystery of the great cats as a species

 

          experienced such closeness: reminiscent of a human relationship, shared moments of emotion and experience

          alone … in solitude: not threatened, felt safe to be on his own, calm, quiet, peaceful, reflective time

          traversing: criss-crossing between the lakes, like a tiger himself

          heart of her territory: central to the area she occupied, sense of power, ownership, emotional attachment and pull of the place for him suggested by ‘heart’


          summon up images (of Noon): can bring to mind pictures, recreate, recall the spirit of this tiger, reminiscent of a magician or sorcerer


          slicing (through their waters): cutting through effortlessly; clean, powerful movement through that appears to part the water, skilful and in her element


          erupting (from a grassy bank): leaping up and out suddenly and powerfully; volcanic; unstoppable natural force


          incredible pursuits: unbelievable chases, apparently no chance of catching them but does, suggests admiration for athleticism and prowess as a hunter


          (images that) remain etched on my mind: cannot forget, experience is part of him, painful and permanent memory, artistry / artistic nature of picture he recalls




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