Directed Writing [0500/22, March 2022]

 

Text A: Why can’t some people just keep still?

The following text discusses why some people fidget more than others.

 

Not long ago, handheld toys called fidget spinners became so popular that they had to be banned from some schools. They were marketed as useful ‘stress relievers’ but had become distracting in classrooms. However, it’s not just kids who like to fidget. Look around your office and you will probably see people bouncing their legs up and down, turning pens over in their hands, chewing, doodling – not because there’s something wrong with them: they’re just fidgety people!

We all know someone who can’t keep still, but why do some people fidget more than others? And if fidgeting really helps to relieve stress, does that mean we should all embrace it?

Research suggests fidgeting or moving around might help us to increase or lower our attention, depending on what is required – either calming or energising us.

People who fidget tend to do so when their minds are wandering and their fidgeting can affect concentration. Memory and comprehension are sometimes badly affected by fidgeting, but for some people it can provide a solution. Fidgeting could provide physiological stimulation to bring our attention and energy to a level that allows our minds to better focus on the task at hand.

Supporting this, one study found that people who were allowed to doodle or draw during a conversation remembered more facts from it than those who weren’t. We also know that some children with specific attention problems perform better when they are engaged in spontaneous physical activity, though no such effect was seen for children without such problems.

Fidgeting might also help us to unconsciously maintain our weight. How can such tiny movements make a difference? Well, it turns out fidgeting while sitting or standing actually increases the calories you burn and can use up around 800 calories a day. One study following 12,000 adults over time found that high levels of fidgeting reduced mortality amongst those with more sedentary lifestyles.

You can’t learn to become a fidgety person – it seems some people are just born fidgeters. Studies show that levels of spontaneous physical activity do run in families.

One final explanation for fidgeting is that it is a behavioural coping mechanism for stress. It seems that being bored can cause stress. Physiological signs of stress rise significantly during periods of sustained attention, such as listening in lessons, so learners may fidget to relieve that stress.


Text B: The fidget fad

The following text, written by a teacher, is about the use of fidget gadgets in their lessons.

Having already endured many teenage fads, I was beginning to hope that we could make it to the end of the academic year without another craze. Then came various so-called fidget gadgets.

One example is the Fidget Cube, the brainchild of dynamic business partners Dominic and Yvonne Duchamp. It has graced many classrooms recently. It is a small plastic device with temptingly clickable, twistable and flickable surfaces. The makers claim the cube reduces more disruptive fidgeting such as rulers being wobbled on the edge of tables. They also claim it increases memory capacity and boosts creativity. To be fair, my mother can’t sit still either, even in old age – she knits all the time – and many workers’ devices are packed with pleasantly distracting apps and games.

Many users of fidget gadgets defend them as a relief to classroom tedium. The Duchamps hoped to highlight that fidgeting itself ought not to be ‘stigmatised and mocked’. I agree that these gadgets benefit some students in certain situations, but to claim that they will destigmatise fidgeting is spurious.

My problem with these devices is not with the dubious claims of the beneficial effects on users but with the effect they have on others in the home or the classroom. They’re an inescapable distraction. While most adults at work may use these devices responsibly, teenagers lack the self-discipline to avoid making a display of their new toy.

If I were a parent, I would want to maximise my child’s learning in whichever way I could but where’s the evidence these gadgets work? I would simply ask them to consider whether their child really needs one


Question

Section A: Directed Writing

The headteacher of your school or college is considering whether or not to allow learners to use fidget gadgets in lessons. Write a letter to the headteacher giving your views.

 In your letter you should:

 

        evaluate the ideas, opinions and attitudes in both texts

        give your own views about the possible effects on learners and teachers of allowing fidget gadgets to be used in lessons.

Base your letter on what you have read in Address both of the bullet points.

Write about 250 to 350 words.

Up to 15 marks are available for the content of your answer, and up to 25 marks for the quality of your writing.


Suggested answers:

Responses might use the following ideas:

 

Text A

 

          not just children fidget, adults do too

 

          might be natural reaction in some people

          some research suggests it helps concentration, some that it doesn’t

          children with attention problems may benefit

          may regulate weight

          may combat boredom

          may run in families

 

Text B

 

          claims made for fidget devices are for increased concentration / creativity

 

          businesses exploit fidgeting profitably so affects many people

          some claims made that classroom fidgeters benefit and gadgets reduce stigma

          can’t trust children to use gadgets responsibly

          using gadgets disrupts others


Possible evaluation of ideas

 

In favour of fidget toys in school:

 

   have to identify genuine fidgeters who will benefit

 

   banning gadgets won’t stop fidgeting

 

   fidgeting is inevitable so a proven gadget is better / might prevent

damage to property

 

   schools should be inclusive / people learn in different ways / long-

term damage to fidgeters with no provision

 

   teachers may prefer more attentive students who have fidget gadgets

   fads only last a short time / may only last with those who need them

   other kids in class benefit when fidgeters have gadgets

 

   fidget gadgets provide an outlet for unhealthy levels of stress or

boredom

 

Against fidget toys in school:

 

   condoning fidget gadgets is disrespectful to teachers

 

   marketing of gadgets targets young people / shouldn’t be believed

   fidget gadgets aren’t allowed in exams / wider world

 

   better ways for students to be active / lose weight

 

   research evidence is hopelessly vague or contradictory

 

   fidget toys won’t prevent distracting fidgeting / not a cure

 

   teenagers just follow trends, whether they need them or not

   increased focus needs to be focus on the lesson, not the toy

   lessons need to be shorter / more engaging to avoid need to fidget






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